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Possessed

I hold myself tight
Deep within
I’m slowly unraveling
Dead little girl

I never have seen the light
Shut in the closet
With locks and chains
Wound across my body

But they cannot stop the pen
How it floats across the paper
Etching in deep lines
More emotions then ever imagined

My smiles are fake
Overly cheery to hide the despair
No one can hear me
Not even myself

I have lost my heart
Been silenced forever
And I cannot ask for help
In fear of rejection

Trying to understand
They cannot fathom
The thoughts that race through your mind
When you are a captive of misery

How I long to run, to laugh
To be free
Yet no one comes and rescues me
I stay cold, heart numb

Darkness, my master
Evil, my soul
Vulnerable, no more
I am strong in my hate
Love, banished from my life

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~Red-Panda-Chan:iconRed-Panda-Chan: Apr 9, 2008, 4:58:20 PM
I like it! :D

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Don't love me like Romeo loved Juliet; if you do it'll only hurt us both...
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"When everything went wrong I had no one to catch me.. Instead I fell." ~One Plus One Equals Two [link]
~rebelteen135:iconrebelteen135: Apr 9, 2008, 4:59:03 PM
geez! You're gonna need to start a folder just for me,

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Popele who are barlnliit are spuitd. It is toshe who are wsie eonguh to usennratdd taht who are srmat.
~Red-Panda-Chan:iconRed-Panda-Chan: Apr 9, 2008, 5:03:55 PM
I could do that... *pondering*

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Don't love me like Romeo loved Juliet; if you do it'll only hurt us both...
~*.><*~
"When everything went wrong I had no one to catch me.. Instead I fell." ~One Plus One Equals Two [link]
~rebelteen135:iconrebelteen135: Apr 9, 2008, 5:04:58 PM
lol I was j/k

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Popele who are barlnliit are spuitd. It is toshe who are wsie eonguh to usennratdd taht who are srmat.
=student-4-ever:iconstudent-4-ever: Apr 9, 2008, 5:09:39 PM
Hm. Interesting idea....

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~einnobztron:iconeinnobztron: Apr 9, 2008, 5:16:41 PM
don't you love it when you just write something and it turns out good and you have no idea why you wrote it in the first place?

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Here's my question: why is it called common sense if it's so rare?
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~rebelteen135:iconrebelteen135: Apr 9, 2008, 5:18:06 PM
sure?:D

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Popele who are barlnliit are spuitd. It is toshe who are wsie eonguh to usennratdd taht who are srmat.
~rebelteen135:iconrebelteen135: Apr 9, 2008, 5:18:44 PM
Im not sure what it was about...

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Popele who are barlnliit are spuitd. It is toshe who are wsie eonguh to usennratdd taht who are srmat.
=student-4-ever:iconstudent-4-ever: Apr 9, 2008, 5:26:23 PM
:rofl: That's okay. Who cares?

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